Shattered
Disappointment
Loss
Anger
Clarity
you bring all of this out of me
you force me to face the truth
what everyone saw
except me
until now
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Part fiction, part true. A good mix of events that transpired. Trying to make it into a short story. What do you think? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...
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Walking into the dimly lit bar that I had agreed to meet a friend, I immediately recognized it. Inhaled it. Felt it. To this day, I ... -
I long to be touched I yearn to feel Awaken this still heart of mine Steal my time with your kisses your desire you. Let consequenc...
15 comments:
I like that!
That was so simple and so moving all at once. I loved it! I do hope that everything is okay, though? Is this real life stuff?
You have made me wonder as well. The poem is wonderful, yet I can't help but think you might be dealing with something personal here?
your truth or their truth?
Ruth- thanks!
Kelley- Thanks! It's real life stuff. Bittersweet ending to a friendship, bleh!
YRJ- ha! See my response to Kelley, above. -Thank you for your concern.
Reeflightning- their truth. I'm just now being "enlightened"
Powerful words. It's tough to face reality, which is why most don't even try. But you have courage, Yvonne.
xoRobyn
Powerful is the perfect word!
Simple and moving and so relatable
Robyn- Very true. Thanks!
FV- :)
Jo-Anne- Glad you like it!
Your poems are so honest and yes, powerful as your friends said.
So powerful.
Belle- thank you!
Jennifer- Thanks!!!
This is so nice ..amazing text
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beautiful
Izdiher- Welcome! And thanks for the compliment and the follow!
Paige- thanks, glad you liked it!
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