Monday, June 22, 2015

poetry attempt fail, or something like that

kissing you 
touching 
hands freely roaming
our bodies in tune with each other
tantalizing whispers
cries of passion
delight

i don't want this moment to end
let's stay here in our world
nothing else matters

in another lifetime, perhaps
in another lifetime
us.






5 comments:

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

Girlfriend, you need to change the title. This is wonderful. No failure at all. Poetry success. Please tell me you'll still going to make a poetry book. You need too. You're a gifted poet.

Yvonne said...

Thank you Robyn! I'm glad you enjoyed it and think it's worth calling poetry. haha. I wasn't feeling it very much. And yes, I am in the process of making that poetry book happen. Stay tuned!

Joseph Pulikotil said...

Hello, well written poem with great emotion and feeling. All of us want such intimate, blissful time to last forever.

Best wishes

Robin said...

This is scorching stuff. Not sure I'm old enough to read it ;)

Yvonne said...

Joseph- Thank you!

Robin- ha! Thanks!