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Monday, September 12, 2011

You

Shattered
Disappointment
Loss
Anger
Clarity
you bring all of this out of me
you force me to face the truth
what everyone saw
except me
until now

15 comments:

Ruth said...

I like that!

Kelley said...

That was so simple and so moving all at once. I loved it! I do hope that everything is okay, though? Is this real life stuff?

'Yellow Rose' Jasmine said...

You have made me wonder as well. The poem is wonderful, yet I can't help but think you might be dealing with something personal here?

reeflightning said...

your truth or their truth?

Yvonne said...

Ruth- thanks!

Kelley- Thanks! It's real life stuff. Bittersweet ending to a friendship, bleh!

YRJ- ha! See my response to Kelley, above. -Thank you for your concern.

Reeflightning- their truth. I'm just now being "enlightened"

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

Powerful words. It's tough to face reality, which is why most don't even try. But you have courage, Yvonne.
xoRobyn

The Frisky Virgin said...

Powerful is the perfect word!

Jo-Anne Rambling said...

Simple and moving and so relatable

Yvonne said...

Robyn- Very true. Thanks!

FV- :)

Jo-Anne- Glad you like it!

Belle said...

Your poems are so honest and yes, powerful as your friends said.

Jennifer Hillier said...

So powerful.

Yvonne said...

Belle- thank you!

Jennifer- Thanks!!!

♥●• Izdiher·•●♥ said...

This is so nice ..amazing text

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Paige said...

beautiful

Yvonne said...

Izdiher- Welcome! And thanks for the compliment and the follow!

Paige- thanks, glad you liked it!