tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post8766775490426413357..comments2023-10-15T03:38:51.861-05:00Comments on Writing my life away!: Love Not MineYvonnehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-84300041061953730022014-01-24T21:02:37.613-06:002014-01-24T21:02:37.613-06:00Crystal- Sometimes I wish I had...
Elise- HA!!! M...Crystal- Sometimes I wish I had...<br /><br />Elise- HA!!! Me too, sister, me too!!! ;)<br /><br />Mshatch- She did and he knew. It was never a secret. -Thanks for dropping by.Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-4885931487036542072014-01-21T13:58:42.475-06:002014-01-21T13:58:42.475-06:00Aw, that was sad. I hope next time she slams the d...Aw, that was sad. I hope next time she slams the door in his face...but...does he know how she feels? mshatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06308916014310536449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-69034375680885856292014-01-21T11:19:36.366-06:002014-01-21T11:19:36.366-06:00As a former jerk-lover I can sympathize, but oh ho...As a former jerk-lover I can sympathize, but oh how I wish I could smack him.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01692020243445517687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-77993633211250587142014-01-21T09:21:02.227-06:002014-01-21T09:21:02.227-06:00=( <--That's about all I want to say.
Oka...=( <--That's about all I want to say. <br /><br />Okay, not really. This was a great little snippet, but I'd seriously lock my door against that kind of guy. Women should hold out until married. Yup.Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-91075232668417051182014-01-21T00:28:45.625-06:002014-01-21T00:28:45.625-06:00Charity- Thanks for dropping by and your comment. ...Charity- Thanks for dropping by and your comment. Ha! I wanted to smack him a few times too back then. :)<br /><br />Kristin- Thank you so much! Ha, no not married. Just a jerk. :)Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-70212406322574495632014-01-20T17:12:03.343-06:002014-01-20T17:12:03.343-06:00Great story and well written! My first thought was...Great story and well written! My first thought was "he's married", but I see from earlier posts that he's not. He's just a jerk! So sad. I feel for your character. Thanks for sharing this excerpt with us!!Kristin Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15119967346326579747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-52821104494754599732014-01-20T09:53:27.841-06:002014-01-20T09:53:27.841-06:00Ug! I just want to smack him and shake him up. So ...Ug! I just want to smack him and shake him up. So sad that he can't see what he's missing out on by being clueless or just a jerk. <br /><br />Thanks so much for participating in the blogfest!Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-68224508440972012372011-05-21T13:00:48.499-05:002011-05-21T13:00:48.499-05:00Karen - "she" opened the door because sh...Karen - "she" opened the door because she knew who it was and because she loves him. but yeah, i get the whole "bad neighborhood" thing! lol<br /><br />Miel et Lait- thank you! glad you liked it!<br /><br />Alyson- thank you for the follow! glad you liked it!<br /><br />Kim- hehe, i know! thanks for your words!Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-47144708663508393242011-05-21T05:07:32.111-05:002011-05-21T05:07:32.111-05:00Oooooo, naughty girl. Fun little read!
Came from ...Oooooo, naughty girl. Fun little read!<br />Came from TRDC.Kim at Let Me Start By Sayinghttp://letmestartbysaying.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-32383890340581496562011-05-21T04:32:24.161-05:002011-05-21T04:32:24.161-05:00really superbly written - had me hanging on to kno...really superbly written - had me hanging on to know where it was going to... really good - following you now xalysonsbloghttp://alysonsblog.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-71510317294766415732011-05-21T03:01:56.952-05:002011-05-21T03:01:56.952-05:00I am very impressed - your word choices are great ...I am very impressed - your word choices are great at pushing the plot along. I definitely think you can turn this into a short story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-16075393463812127242011-05-21T02:19:15.677-05:002011-05-21T02:19:15.677-05:00I think there is DEFINITELY more to tell with this...I think there is DEFINITELY more to tell with this story!<br /><br />I was just a little confused about him showing up at the door late and unannounced and why she would open the door without knowing who it was. But then, maybe that's just because I'd never do that in my neighborhood...Karen M. Petersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972093977468313631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-22767849332239114982010-12-25T12:26:19.176-06:002010-12-25T12:26:19.176-06:00Loved it. Wonderfully written :)Loved it. Wonderfully written :)Sh@shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04458716449718422625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-53445674979859289092010-12-21T22:02:31.979-06:002010-12-21T22:02:31.979-06:00ugh! darn keyboard! i meant "weakling"!ugh! darn keyboard! i meant "weakling"!Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-27723664668973893972010-12-21T22:01:37.687-06:002010-12-21T22:01:37.687-06:00Belle - lol thanks sweetie!
Rita - two peas in a ...Belle - lol thanks sweetie!<br /><br />Rita - two peas in a pod we are!<br /><br />Mynx - Yay! I'm glad it kept you intrigued.<br /><br />Alessandra - I love your name by the way! He left because he just used her for sex. He is not married, doesn't even have a girlfriend. She is just his "go to" person. And that would be just fine if there were no emotions involved but there Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-34069621764737674452010-12-21T19:00:10.604-06:002010-12-21T19:00:10.604-06:00Oh. My. Goodness...have I ever been there. It'...Oh. My. Goodness...have I ever been there. It's not a fun place to be but I'm weak when it comes to love and physical urges...so I get it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-8347277000732871432010-12-21T11:22:13.799-06:002010-12-21T11:22:13.799-06:00Why did he have to leave? I gotta know 'cause ...Why did he have to leave? I gotta know 'cause there better be a mighty good reason for it. I'm waiting for chapter 2....Alessandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12322892477027654637noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-78903891447309317342010-12-21T01:47:17.452-06:002010-12-21T01:47:17.452-06:00Great story, had me captured right until the endGreat story, had me captured right until the endnot displayedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11637174135437423585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-35861205165244842502010-12-21T00:14:58.292-06:002010-12-21T00:14:58.292-06:00I love it..and I feel "your" painI love it..and I feel "your" painCinderitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08956914407883027586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-35162711932119972142010-12-20T23:53:26.098-06:002010-12-20T23:53:26.098-06:00Excellent story - but I hate him.Excellent story - but I hate him.Bellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14175778756449339363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-83181380705820855112010-12-20T23:46:38.465-06:002010-12-20T23:46:38.465-06:00AG- Wow! Thanks! lol Glad you liked it!AG- Wow! Thanks! lol Glad you liked it!Yvonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08038918668619367960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105870530641515642.post-18988169518424848462010-12-20T23:45:29.901-06:002010-12-20T23:45:29.901-06:00watch out Jackie Collins... here comes Yvonne! Aw...watch out Jackie Collins... here comes Yvonne! Awesome chickalet!Average Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05171277050030497007noreply@blogger.com